Very good page and that room-mate sounds intriguing! That feeling you describe, when you review old works and the memories come back is very strong for me, too. Just recently I was reminded of my experiences with fractals and 3d-design and the spark of creation fired up again. Anyway, I'll keep an eye for the supernatural invading Jame's real life.

Also, about the apostrophes, it's good to have a second eye edit the pages. I've read it two times and I did not notice the errors, they may be minor, but the devil is in the details (and Jame's dreams!)