New Hell City | James M. Wolf Paranormal Investigator

in #comic6 years ago


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  It is a city like any other, only dark tenebrous, with many ventilation ducts, sewers and any kind of crime, it has humans, demons, succubi, vampires and zombies resulted in this horrible and fucking city full of sin and opportunism. It is divided into many criminal sectors.

 In the north part of the city belongs to the zombie mafia since they are immortal and are the kind of subject you are looking for those jobs of course, unless you shoot at the head, physically they look like fucking green monster, they do not feel pain, although strangely if they keep their emotions they ingest any kind of brain of any to race to survive. 

On the other hand we have the West that belongs to the vampires some suckers suck blood, who have a monarchical society and are governed by the level of purity in their race they are dedicated mostly to the trafficking of organs, they are more than all blond bastards, they measure 1.90 meters have scarlet eyes.   

In the east there is more than all the fucking succubus, it's like a mixture of neighborhood with brothel, here it goes to people to their most lustful and dark desires, but end up dead and ingested by these beautiful demons, most of all they do not have a appearance adapts to the tastes of the victim so that they lower their guard, but even so the bastards stop stepping on the eastern district of the city. 

The South part of the city is dominated by demons, their way of subsisting is the sale of drugs and the trafficking of souls, they are bastards in what is about scams and cheating, they also have 80% of the casinos of the city, careful you do not want to bet your soul for a fortune, physically 2-meter bastards, yellow gold eyes, very polite, mostly dressed in suit and tie, are very intelligent and can very look like humans with big horns and red hair, and others are just a fat ass red.

This is my first story, I hope little by little to improve and be a great screenwriter. Please think what you like, if you like to upvote or resteem.

Thanks to all who read to make my dream possible. I hope to continue counting on your support!

Thanks to #steemit-webcomics who created a community of comics in steemit.

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the story is good so far, I feel like there could also be some more dialogue :O

Thank you very much, I'll take your advice :D

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