Stand up comedy with flu! My first collab with @dcooperation!

in #comedyopenmic8 years ago (edited)


Hello friends how is your dtubing going?

Well im sick lately and when im sick i get to think crazy thoughts, thanks god im still alive!

Anyway, this time was different( no inguries) in opposit i found it funny. And here i am sharing it with you!

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Im not offending anyone you are all my family and i love you so much, the video meant to be funny!

The topic im going to talk about is Even females have beard and moustach!

So keep focusing on this while watching the video cause every thing else is just a stand up 😂😂.

I invested the most time(3hours) in editing the video and adding the right clip in the right place(please note that this all was made by an smartphone) so sorry if it's not professional!

I hope you injoy the video!

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That's good stuff man! I thought you did a fine job with the editing, especially at the end with the shaving part.

Don't be afraid to go a little faster. Especially in the beginning of the video you could have talked a bit quicker or edited a bit tighter to make the shots closer together. But overall great job!

I'm still working on my English so the words don't want to come easy, for this whole video i didn't prepare to what i have to say, i just gotoff the scene😂 then when i came to edit i spent the most time to make it funny, tho i had to edit a bit on the beginning as you said, I'll try to do better next time! Thanks for your feedback it was really encouraging!!

Oh wow, didn't know you were still learning English, totally understandable on the pacing, and well done! Your accent is so negligible that I honestly couldn't tell.

Even if you still talk the same speed, you can try tighter edits. This is an example of what I'm talking about. It's not comedy, and he talks fast to begin with, but just watch for a minute or two and see how tight the cuts make the words to each other. I think when you make your next video (and I hope you do!) you can experiment with some tighter cuts and see what it does for ya.

Bravo!

Definitely I'm trying in it out on my next video, I'm just looking for something to talk about (to make it funny)

You should talk about what your think about Donald Trump. That will be hilarious no matter what 😉

Loool, when i see comedy video on yt all what i see is Donald jokes, I'm trying to stay away from that :)

Lol, quite inspiring isn't it ? 😂😂

You don't want to be around me while I'm having cold :)

Funny stuff. Keep it up.

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