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RE: Through The Innocent Eyes Of A Child
Great story , well written , catchy , I'm just a bit flustered with the ending , its too short to be a real "inception" ending , thank you for trying to get people out of the box with their thinking , once again its very well written and gripping .
Thank you. Of all criticism I could receive, 'too short' is acceptable ;)