Bratříček - krátký příběh

in #cesky • 5 years ago (edited)

Bratříček

Otevírám dveře sklepní
a už letím do hlubin.
Proč jen sakra u nás doma
úklid schodů hraje prim!

Bratr malý nezvedený
však se kření nahoře.
Namazal mi schody mýdlem
jako ňáké potvoře.

Nebylo to mýdlem,
ale spíše šampónem.
Sletěl jsem tam dolů
jako voda náhonem.

Polámaný dole,
To byl teda úlet.
Vytahuje mobil!
Asi budu střílet.

Hlavně mi teď kámo
nepřestávej kvílet!
Brácha mačká knoflík.
Na Fejsbůku sdílet…
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#snax #shortstory #busy #theluvbug
5 years ago in #cesky by
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     5 years ago 

    Pěkné a rýmované. Vysoko je laťka.

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     5 years ago 

    Hluboká poklona, mistře!

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       5 years ago 

      :-) Děkuji

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         5 years ago 

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             5 years ago 

            vtipné :D

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               5 years ago 

              Díky, rád jsem pobavil ;)

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                 5 years ago 

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