POEM: RIVERSTILL

in #busy8 years ago (edited)

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See my love,
not as morning sight

where the blur obscures
the dawn's blue bite

where the wooden floors
spill their cold winter chill

may you see me in my love, Riverstill

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may you see me
as I am and not just
how you want me

may you see my intent
whether targeted or shifting

the pull of the bow
brings me closer to,
the us I've yet know

may you see me in my love, Riverstill

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I know you love to rush
and push through dipping days

sometimes in currents
friends look distant in passing

sometimes I know you
see my hurt without asking

may you see me in my love, Riverstill

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when I have gone so far
that my face is forgotten

and forethought flesh
fades into everlasting

when you look at where I stood
and the places I would go for you

may you see me...


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For some reason I thought that this poem is about a whale/whales... hehe
May you see me Mr. Whale!

Not at all!! but that would be funny.

May I see you in my upvotes,
Mrs. Whale

hahahah!

This post has received gratitude of 4.83 % from @appreciator thanks to: @rubenalexander.

U got amazaing writing skills mate. good work.

I really like your cool words. They are polished refind diamonds. How can we appreciate great soul greater than your precious jems.That is a very touching poem.

rate love so quickly, without think further.
forgetting everything, love sensual distress into action like a bullet fly.!!
your poems into advice for me, thanks @rubenalexander

Supper poetry

very nice poem.

Love that night shot over the city.

Wow really that is greate ,,,,

Those beautiful sighs and the poem was so lovely to explore thanks for sharing

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