Firstly, I'm not sure exactly what the native token of use will be on your platform for buyers and sellers to transact in? Your diagram actually shows USD!
Round A delegators get 3Stors per SP, so 100SP gets 300 Stors in 6 months time.
100SP right now is worth $33 USD, but you also suggest after a transaction of $250 USD value, there would be 75 stors given away worth a $45 value upvote?
So each 100SP delegator will get 300 Stors worth 4 x $45 upvote a total of $180 USD worth!! Where is the SP to back all these upvotes coming from ?
Thirdly, Your commission model is old hat. The biggest Online retailers in Asia charge 0% commission to sellers, but make money from selling promotion, how about transaction costs?
Sorry but your white paper is poor and leaves more questions unanswered than answered for anyone wishing to make an investment decision.
No mention of funding ? How much is the team fronting up ?
I'm sorry but until schemes like this get serious about business plans and providing transparency to would be investors, the crypto movement will sadly never be taken seriously.
And with typical greed, all people here appear to be interested in is how much they will get!!
And as for the logo and graphic design.....seriously!!
Finally, a lot of people trust respect Taksmasters opinions, but no-where does it say this post has been sponsored by Dstors. Transparency matters.