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RE: ALCOHOL WARS [A PROHIBITION-ERA SHORT STORY]
Freaking phenomenal story! I was feeling suspicious of that guy from the beginning. I mean, who doesn't want to go home early? AWESOME story!!! I love it. And your use of the second prompt was utterly genius!
yea... he's indeed a dark character, that second prompt was kinda hard to get around for me because it was a question lol. I had to squeeze my way through it. I'm glad you enjoyed the read, thanks for the comment.
Those second prompts are often difficult to get by, but they bring out such great writing!