RAGE AND DISGUISE
The world is changing,
People tend to pretending
My worldview view is trembling
Due to it fast moving
Time, money, and health at your hand
Waiting to be used for the good of our fellow human being.
Where are you in the time of needed
Hide in the place where no one can seek
Be brave, make your move, steady your heart!
For victory only for those who keep the walk!
No matter how slow you walk
As long as you don't stop.
Rumah Sakit Gatot Subroto,
February 23rd, 2018
@bagindooo
Keep spirit,,,,
Thanks for stopping by! Sure!
puitisss sekali
Kalo terpaksa bisa juga, apalagi di paksa!
No worries. Fighter can walking with much way
As long you don't stop, possibilities is wide open to those who seek!
Keep write and give something to people. Well, this poetry good experience and positive think. Like a bird fly in the sky to back home and give she children warm.
Thanks master, with great humble!
Puitis, dan inspiratif, Bagindo. Lanjut
Okay!thank!
Cool poem. The 2nd to last line should probably read "No matter how slow you walk"
thanks for the correction, i wrote in phone, kind of like typo things. thanks again anyway!
you should change it before it becomes permanent.
Yes, thanks again, I just made it and adding time and place to it!