What a lovely Gabriel. You picked up many important details. One tiny comment, Gabriel's hands are inked with moon tattoos, but there is a shadow on the left hand so we probably wouldn't see it. https://steemit.com/writing/@jamielefay/ahe-ey-playing-by-her-rules-an-original-novel-part-20 I am so grateful that you are taking the time to join the #bringaheeytolife competition Elias. Thank you. Great job, J