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RE: [Original Novel] Ragnarok Conspiracy; (Part Four Chapter Eight)
Ok, hoping that my bandwidth capacity holds out for this...
He was way of course.
of -> off
Robert felt himself getting heavy. He felt himself getting pressed into his chair harder than before, Much harder.
Much -> much
Dozens of busy and alien looking short grey people were working
alien looking -> alien-looking
Azraela turned away from Robert, then disappeared behind the crystal wall.
Azraela -> Azraella
There were the same as the language he and the ship spoke.
There -> They
Also, in Robert's flashback that consisted of the single word "Grammer!", was that supposed to refer to someone/something with that name, or to the word grammar?