(NOT a valid comment for purposes of the drawing)

There are several other grammatical and spelling errors in this chapter, including one in the very first paragraph, plus one later on involving a character's name. Time to find out if there exists another Steemian who can be bothered to point out these easy-to-spot errors (or any others in the chapter).

I'll get back to this chapter after the new year and finish up then (barring the near-impossible scenario of enough people with the proper skills showing up in the next 48 hours).