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RE: [Original Novel] Ragnarok Conspiracy; (Part Four Chapter Eight)

in #book7 years ago

Fear. Robert realized he had not has his head at navigating. He had been distracted. They were going too fast.

The bolded sentence sounds awkward. There are multiple ways to make this sentence more comprehensible. I would go with this:

Robert realized that he hadn't been fully focused on navigating.

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