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RE: [Original Novel] Ragnarok Conspiracy; Captured (Part Four Chapter Three)
It was as if he was both weak and entoxicated by some drug. Then Xavier notices a disturbance in the water close to him. Instinctively Xavier kicked as hard as he could with his remaining leg. His leg plonged into the red coloured water underneath him.
entoxicated -> intoxicated
notices -> noticed
plonged -> plunged