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RE: [Original Novel] Ragnarok Conspiracy; Captured (Part Four Chapter Three)
I've escape from the people that used my work to tear apart civilization, forced me to apply my skills to serve their greed. Did you think that if I managed to escape from a subterranean bunker six hundred meters under the ground, guarded by hundreds of soldiers and thousands of AI drones, did you fail to consider I would have some advanced technology up my sleeve?
escape -> escaped
civilization, forced -> civilization and forced
The last phrase could use some rephrasing, here's one way:
that I would not have some advanced technology up my sleeve?