Blue Pencil Writing Tip # 1

in #blue-pencil7 years ago

Readers want information quick and easy. They google their question and don't want to rifle through a bunch of fluff, or unnecessary filler words, to get their answer.

Most internet readers skim the page to find what their looking for. Admit it ~ you do too!

White space is important to keep your reader on the page!

Check out these examples:

Little White Space:


Appropriate White Space:

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examples with permission Words Hurt

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See how much easier it flows when white space is utilized in between groups and paragraphs?

As an author I can attest to the fact a publishing house will reject your manuscript before even reading it if they do not see a good balance of white space.

Make your post professional by using White Space. Your readers will love you for it!

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Thanks for the valuable tips

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