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RE: When do women feel happy? by fj zameer
The concept of the article is interesting but the English language and structure is lacking too much to completely understand or enjoy it.
The concept of the article is interesting but the English language and structure is lacking too much to completely understand or enjoy it.
ok thank you next time i will try my best and try good words.............
Sorry for being blunt, I do believe honest critique can serve to improve your posts. Understandably it is hard to improve much in a short period of time but putting more time into editing your posts might help to improve both your posts and your skill, learning while practising.