You have a very creative imagination to have come up with such a short but good story. As @trincowski mentioned on his comment, you need to specify next time that your post is your original creation so it will not pose any doubts on your readers' mind. Also, if you use a photo from the internet, you need to specify the source so you won't be tagged for plagiarism. I see that you are fairly new on Steemit so I hope that you take our pieces of advice positively, including those pieces mentioned by others who commented earlier than this mine.

As you know, your post was featured by @aggamun on his article which is an entry to the Pay It Forward Curation Contest. The contest is open to everyone so you are welcome to join us.

Keep writing inspiring stories!