Oh man these are great.

One tip though, use more tags at the bottom. You can have up to 5, and the more tags the more that people can find your work. As long as the tag can be said to be slightly related.

I would use some tags such as 'story' 'humor' 'life'
If you want, you can edit them in now. The only thing you can't do is change the first tag. Keep on writing these, its hilarious!