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RE: Finish the Fiction Story Contest - Week #21
Creepy the way you got inside the mind of the Those.
the squishing sound of lead on flesh and the click of teeth.
and then
snapped in from under his chin eating the smile from his face.
That was a really effective metaphor. I also liked the way that you made it like a reality tv show at the end for a future society. Real nice twist :-)
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