Oh my, this is such an inspired poem <3 i think it's fair to say you managed a poem, a story, and a song here. Words alive with the leaping spirit of the bananafish, as deep as the ocean we swim in, as beautiful as the array of colors we make. There is reflection and wonder that grows with each read, capturing so many of our values, whilst really conveying that spirit of unfettered freedom we aim for. The repetition of this element:

The great vessel of wind and dust inside there is boiling a secret of liquid gold

so much of this really struck a chord with me, what a beautiful way of describing the way we come together to share in the bounty.

Between the vivid and fluidity of imagery here, you have woven so much, and so many of us in here with such skill! <3