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RE: Finish the Fiction Story Contest - Week #21

in #bananafish6 years ago

Nice the way you turned the point of view right away. Otherwise, pretty grisly... I really got into the gore. And then you took us literally out of this world. Turned the story on its head--nice trick.

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Thanks @agmoore. Gore always a hit for this contest. LOL

I think it's one of the reasons I had trouble writing... my mind goes in another direction :)

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