Such a wonderful story, it might be brief but for readers of the romantic sort, I am sure many are wanting more. You have a talent to construct a beautiful plot which I think is a fundamental aspect in delivering the context of the story.

For the story, love is always a good subject. No matter how you deliver it and how the story will end, love will always put a presence in the hearts of the readers, be it a happy ending or tragic one. It is a human aspect that everyone acknowledged. Even though the plot of your story transcends the fantasy world, many can still relate to it because of love. Many would have reminisced their experience and would compare theirs to the story and it is quite amazing. It is just the individual's matter of perspective and symbolism to play out this short story. I wonder if you can write a sequel about it.

Cheers for your wonderful write-up. It is a wonderful read. God bless you.