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@lazariko12 Nobody wants to watch the fireworks while sitting in a pile of gravel. No one wants to stare straight up to watch them, hurting their neck.
In other words, setting matters. Same goes with your writing.
You need to set up the story or argument or whatever with a good hook — an introduction of the main problem or theme — and draw the reader in with your content.
You only have a few moments to grab the reader’s eye. Don’t squander it with a less-than-extraordinary setting. Sit your reader down, make sure she’s comfortable, and draw her into the story.

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Hi, @raghwendra. Sorry you didn't enjoy my writing! I will do my best next time to improve it :)
Thanks for your building feedback, I really appreciate it!

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