As Easy as Air (Original)
rushing around us
filling the spaces of you,
scattering the pieces of me
it concentrates
in the mind's corners
the broom closets of the soul
you ride in from far east
rising towards me like the dawn
and I can hear your journey ending now.
rushing around us
filling the spaces of you,
scattering the pieces of me,
ceaselessly.
If you are the fading light
I am the scarlet bed
If you are morning ablutions
I am the sin of every evening
For every finger of wind that licks the space around us
I am the rushing, scattered air
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I really liked the visual effects of the text and how they seemed to resemble clouds, or winds if winds were represented with shape. Great write.
Nice, I was going for that effect!
My goodness! Such passion!
It's been a particularly intense year for me and writing helps. I'm glad it affected you, Lady Fu ;)
I like fingers of air.
Try giving a high five to a hand of air ;)
Like a leaf on the wind.
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