hey there,

i like you paint a lot and you have nice motives and ideas.

Give your artworks more time and look at other artists works. For example between the eyes is exact space for one eye more, the lips ends most time where the pupils are, ... between eyelashes and eye is always a skin part, ...
AND MORE TIME FOR MORE PHOTOREALISM ;) ... (if you want to paint photoreal).

...its just how i work or learned. of course you cant paint what ever you want ;) !

...check my profile if you interested in art, tutorials, videos, ...

Have a great time
Peace,

-edga NOWARGraffitis