Looks like you made some really good decisions here with the design. I think the drape on top and the pillow on the bottom have just enough detail to tell the story but not enough to take attention away from the focal point. They act as a good frame drawing our eyes in. Would love to see that "in the room" effect. I've had that on some charcoal drawings that I've done before where it feels like you can reach in to it. Good stuff! :))