"Ithaqa" Comic Update #28 A Car Corrected

When I first uploaded the pencil of this panel awhile back, a follower mentioned that the geography of the first panel here was a bit confusing. Theresa and I have solved that problem by eliminating the other cars from frame, and making this a people jam, and not a traffic one.

The fault was on me when I first described the panel in the script. I wanted to convey that Mookie's terrible parking job was causing problems for other cars outside the tea shop, not really visualizing to myself how that could work. Readers here pointed out that the perspective didn't make much sense, and once they pointed it out I realized it was true.

Theresa and I spitballed a few fixes until I decided that it didn't need to be a traffic jam, we could just convey that pedestrians were being inconvenienced, which would be enough for Joseph Dunwich (the man in black) to comment angrily on on the page after this one.

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