Capsule cosm
C A P S U L E
C O S M
Forever
motionless capsule
where time has never begun.
Nothing
has ever changed.
Nothing
has ever been born.
Eternal, this
conceptless unknown.
With infinite hunger,
it obliterates self-knowledge.
Geometry, physics, mathematics:
It extinguishes linearity.
Crushes rationality.
Cannibalizes intellect.
Scapegoats the hanging world
Of dust and procreation.
Flicks the droplet of humanity
& their watery magnetism
Off its hands.
Planets its billiard balls,
Asteroids its pond pebbles,
Galaxies its dim dowry,
Voidfulness its bride.
Hey @d-pend! I REALLY think that when you collaborate with photographers so that you are using ORIGINAL images with your poems, it really takes your work to a higher level. I suggest this be the next MAJOR aspect of your work that you develop. For me, I am ACTUALLY a photographer, and so have been using MY OWN photos (collected over YEARS) and then adding the poetry now. I think that "photo poems" are a valuable form of content on Steemit. Hope to see more of this...
Once again you provide quite valuable feedback and food for thought. Thank you very much @transcript-junky! I agree. I want to begin taking more of my own photos in the near future to use, as well. Hopefully I will be purchasing a nice camera pretty soon :)
Right on. Just keep in mind that you can START with a mobile phone camera. Most of them will do the job adequately while you save up for a more proper camera. I find that the photography process also adds another dimension to the poetry writing. I'm sure you will discover this as you proceed...
@d-pend this poem the everything and nothing are described within the cosmos. @gold84
And it is a complement believe me
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Yes, it is a priority for me that it looks aesthetically pleasing, so I'm glad you like it!
Not everyone likes to read, but everyone likes to look. :-D
Thanks omar!!
~ You are most welcome my bro. ~
☔☞☀☺
Wow, that makes me very happy to know. Sometimes it seems such a tiny difference we can make, but even a small display of kindness can be quite powerful.
Wholeness!
INDEED MY BRO.
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@d-pend
i forget to teal you
✿ -- happy thanksgiving -- ✿
please forgive meWow @d-pend been a long time buddy, this is another belting write up.
The images are divine, the imageries and word chemistry is awesome, i love this ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Hi @josediccus, great descriptor you've got there. "belting." I don't hear that much! Is it british slang? Anywhoo, thanks very much! Have a great day.
It is sir, it means strong impact buddy, keep on writing the good stuff.
Your poems are too sweet too not to be enjoyed
Incredible poem you always blow me away! I hope you had a beautiful thanksgiving Daniel🌷
Thank you so much! I had a wonderful day, hope you did too :-D
Great writing style. Your words and art touch the soul. We need more of this in this world. Keep it up. Thanks.
Thats amazing
Pics looking very amazing
Priceless
Gratitude
Fly words perfection - incredible aspect of soul poetry.