can i call it miniature ?

miniature is traditional Persian painting style . and i like it so much .

The bright and pure colouring of the Persian miniature is one of its most striking features.
The miniatures normally occupy a full page, later sometimes spreading across two pages to regain a square or horizontal landscape format , and mine is in a circle , lol .

Which one is better ?

i prefer the black and white . and my mother like the other one .

while colouring

and steps

i draw it with pencil and then pen . its easier to correct any mistake .

you can click on images and see my previous posts :

Thank you for your support <3