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RE: Amazing Animals #27 The Flamboyant Cuttlefish
A lot of work went into this post and I can feel the deep interest you have into this fascinating species family.
What makes the post a bit hard to read is the length of your sentences. May I suggest that you try to keep sentences a bit shorter for future posts? Otherwise a very instructive article.
Well done.
I try to limit the general length of my sentences though I am guilty of over-extending, and occassionaly rambling, I get carried away sometimes!
My main goal is to share what I'm passionate about with whoever may come across my articles, and ease of reading is definately important.
I'm always open to constructive criticism and I'll keep it at the forefront of my mind for future posts. :)