Good effort! Well done. I like the concept of this.

For the English translation there are a few spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.
This will distract from the message you are trying to deliver, so it is worth investing the time to get someone who is good at English to edit the presentation for you. (you can't edit your own stuff. It just doesn't work).

I'd love to offer to help you, but at the moment I'm up to my ears in work (and I'm supposed to be on holiday).

Good luck with your initiative. I think this is an awesome thing you are doing.