The Sexiest Steemit Post You Will Ever Read
She ran from him just fast enough so he could catch her,
and he followed as he knew he should.
When the wind blew and the leaves on the trees rustled you would expect them to feel the chill of the air
but between them there was only heat.
It emitted from every pore, from every breath, from every inch of them both.
For the first time in his life he could feel the rotation of the earth.
In fact, he swore he could hear it move.
No quiet night had ever been so loud.
No act of defiance had ever been so in tune with its surroundings.
She ran from him just fast enough so he could catch her,
and he followed as he knew he should.
Until she stopped to turn and face him,
by a tree,
near a brook,
and with one look,
they were naked in the garden.
Divide me by Infinity
A heritage of dreams deferred is your Ego’s inheritance, but the universe is the birthright of your soul.
Divide me by infinity and I’ll be the same thing I was when I started
inside you
in this place
here.
“If you surrender to the air, you could ride it.” ~Toni Morrison
I stumble through the mist short of air and bloody.
My hair is wet from the rain, my heart is pounding in fear of what’s next to come. SHCRAACK! The crunch and crackle of metal striking metal and glass shattering echoes in the air. This is the end of times. I am in a war zone, lost in the chaos — my senses abandoned to frantic emotion. Whatever adrenaline was meant to kick-in, hasn’t. I hear what sounds like a faint whistle increasing in my ear to a loud excruciating screech as a massive gust of wind blows beside me and I briefly see an object graze my side. It shoots past my shoulder. I turn to make out what it was; but before my eyes can even adjust focus, they are blinded by heat and light.
I awake.
My eyes open only to cower back into their lids. The sun is bright hot and I can feel it on my face. Even with my eyes closed, I can tell I am being carried on a gurney. I let the pain settle in and take another attempt at opening my eyes. This time the pain is more bearable. As my eyes open, I see two soldiers carrying me, but I can’t make out the colors or the emblem on their uniforms.
“She is awake” says one.
“Lucky her” says the other sarcastically.
He’s right. I go back to sleep hoping not to wake up.
Silence is patience wading in the waters of a frantic wake, sleeping in the settled unrest of chaos, killing time to live forever. To fear God is to run with reckless abandon into the unknown, blind, naked and famished for certainty, in debt to nothing but your dreams.
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this is really awesome @vmsolutionsltd, you got me from the ptich to the end , yet where did we go ? lead by these words you have written !! Excellent really ) Upvoted Steem On ) you should stop by to the steamspeak radio on discord and meet the gang )
I think I am already in the steemspeak discord, not sure, but if I am I have been there for a few weeks now and it hurts me deeply that you don't recognize me.
Oh really is that true !! thats too sweet your animation, I feel quite guilty now , maybe you should let me know next time you see or hear me there )) Hey I upvoted your post right ?? so not so bad eh ?? ) steem On whoever you are lol
The post is awesome and this guy I want to adopt lol
Thank you.
My pleasure .. lol
Nice eyes.
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wow, this great
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lol, sure and great gif
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huge amount of work there!
You noticed.
So I'm not a fan of this layout.
It seems very disjointed and while thatdoes have its place in storytelling, it's not as a standalone piece (unless you're in 1970's America. lots of drugs caused that phenomenon, and most agree that very little of note was produced.)
Your Sig at the bottom was just a touch too much for me. I think it was the steemitboard achievement pic that made it too long, but the extra gifs made it a bit too tacky (like an oldschool geocities or angelfire page). Pick tacky or long, but both feels weird.
This is honest criticism, because that's literally what you asked for at the beginning of the post.
I was thinking the exact same thing, to be honest. Thanks. Except for the statment you made about 1970's America. I think my writing is more 1950's and 60's and you would be foolish to suggest no great writing came out of that era.
Sorry I was unclear. Reading words is like having a movie play in my head. I get visuals and audio with it. So it wasn't the books from the 70's, but the movies of the 70's I was envisioning. Like Wizards but very... broken.
Ok. Well the post you just read was me taking my old content and reworking into this style. This post is the exact same style except the post was created specifically for Steemit. How do you think it plays in that post?