Interesting, i'm guessing you live in PHC. I'm just guessing since I don't really know much about your country except I could tell based on a few familar places i've seen on google map. Anyways thanks for the little tour !

There is one sentence which I think is missing something:

Went to work from work I went to my.....

I think you would need to insert and or then after work.

I'd also like to share a way to hide the long link displaying your source of information.
The long link will be hidden in a text or word using the following markdown:

Here is the markdown:
[Text or word here](link here) .

the link will be hidden in the text or word making your blog more attractive