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RE: AIR-CLINIC WRITING CONTEST ON STRESS, THE QUEST TO MEET ENDS MEAT
Hey @teslim,
Very good writeup.
We love how you told a real personal story.
You need to work on your paragraphing. and sentence formation. Your words are too clumped together.
Much appreciation from Air-Clinic!
Thank you so much @air-clinic , I will take note and improve on the areas mentioned, I really appreciate everyone @air-clinic