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RE: ADSactly Short Story - The Day Abba Ran
Hahahaha. Very creative story, @greenrun! I never would have imagined that ending. Full of fantasy nuances! That's what good stories do: they're not predictable and they get hooked from the first moment. Although it is a simple story, the reader feels identified because it narrates a credible event that can happen to anyone. So it would be the terrifying experience of finding a ghost that the idea of the boss having a girlfriend took a back seat. If you notice, in the end it was the guests who were surprised. Thank you for your story.
Thank you for that sincere feedback. An everyday story with just a single twist. Haha.
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