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RE: ADSactly Short Story - And Die (story part 2)

in #adsactly6 years ago

I appreciate in the continuation and completion of your story, @churchboy, the maintenance of the intrigue of the first part, with very good resolution of the central conflict, resorting to that resource so characteristic of the wisdom and popular imaginary: magic. I suppose that in Nigeria, as in all of Africa (perhaps much more than in America: I'm from Venezuela), this resource has a lot of force in the population. The incorporation of this tool for the development and solution of the problem experienced by Peter, which ends up being a way of enveloping the "purchase" strategy of the prison officials used by Agbor (paid with Peter's money), gives the story a nice tone, in the middle of the tension, and a certain "happy ending", with a possible implicit moral: no ambitions outside your possibilities and enjoy what you have within your reach. Nice reading, @churchboy.

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