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RE: Adsactly Short Story - Two Dark Sides of a Coin

in #adsactly6 years ago

The drought made everything work as a team although it was very hard for them to go through all they could hold until the rain came but the rain also hurt them having to leave their homes temporarily until the miracle came the rain stopped and everyone returned to their homes with the hope of a better life, this story lacked a happy ending.

The end could have been that after so much tragedy the village had a great harvest, the children happily played cows every day
They reproduced quickly and food and water were plentiful.

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I love that ending. And their animals bore more animal and the village was happy and strong forever.

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