Entry: Mizu no Oto - Every image Has Its Haiku - Edition #47

in #haikucontest4 years ago (edited)

Clear water.

A quiet moment

mixed up.

[photo by @marcoriccardi]

This is my entry to Mizu no Oto - Every image Has Its Haiku - Edition #47 (English) hosted by @bananafish. No matter if you can write, like to read poems writing one can be fun.
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thanks a lot for your support !!!
Quitting is folly,
one certainty in life i have, is that life will do that for me one day.
*the Dark Catling*


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No, I don't mind a quote at a time.
Thank you. Enjoy your weekend. 👍🏻💕

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it's getting really hard to upvote the whole blockchain ;-) ... the tipu tips depend on time of charging, i dont have enough funds to provide every feed on every post i subscribed, its a token of appreciation ofcourse and i KNOW you're one of the good ones, if you dont want the TRDO-thing leave a reply to it i check the @tyrnannoght replies daily, if so i'll move you to the "maar ik wil dat niet" and "doesntwanna" lists ;-)

oh .. let's see

"ducks and pigeons sit"
"together in the water"
"all is well today" ... i still cant find decisive on wether haiku goes by syllable as in japanese every character would be one but

what matters is to convey the idea is it not

LOL for a moment I thought you wrote
"ducks and pigeons shit"...😅

It goes by syllable but if it comes to English the rules are changed.
It's 3-4 instead of 5-7 but I am happy with this one.

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you sound like you're a very happy girl ;-) and i guess those birds do
to :)

@doingdailies I can make my children and friends laugh out loud, I believe we have a certain kind of humor (not all people like it). Sorry for the late answer. I wish you a great weekend. 💕

Quiet and disquiet together in harmony. Very nice.

Thank you for your comment. I am happy with it. I wish you a great day. 💕

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Thank you very much. 👍🏻

I think this is a very good haiku, I like it a lot!
Nonethless, I feel something strange about the punctuation. I'd like you to explain a bit to me why you chose to put periods after the second and the third verse.
I can't help reading it like this:

Clear water.
A quiet moment
mixed up.

I have no explanation for it as stupid struggling with typing because I can hardly see what I am doing. 😭

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Hi @kittywhocares! I want to inform you that the new Mizu no Oto is online. We wait for your beautiful haiku! Take care!
https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@bananafish/mizu-no-oto-every-image-has-its-haiku-edition-48-english-spanish

Thank you! I puzzle it out soon. 👍💕

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