Random Thoughts of Poetry 📝 Untitled Poems#05
Since then I knew that you would be Mine.
With all my heart and Soul,
I give my whole devotion to have and Hold.
No matter how long is the road,
We'll walk many Miles,
As long as we are together wearing our precious Smiles.
Sending to you my love on a magnificent Flight,
For you to ravish all my senses with pure Delight.
Never let our Afire Love Expire,
As we continue to lit the flames of our fervent Fire.
As love symbolizes what Life is all About,
We shall never let our Afire love burn Out.
As our love will shine Eternally,
No one can change our Destiny.
Filling my heart with so much Desire,
My soul is prepared enough to land with you on the Electric Wire.
Hope you like my random piece of melodramatic poetry. Share and comment your thoughts and experiences in relation to the poem and you'll receive a quite good weight of upvotes from me. Thank you and don't forget to follow me, @themanualbot!
Beautiful and heart touching poetry @themanualbot your heart voice i like it
Thank you for the appreciation @kamchore
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Hi dear freind
Merry Christmas.
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I saw you at the Gift Giving Day. It's fair to say that it's wrong to judge a book by it's cover. The depth of your poems are amazing. I could tell that you draw inspiration of your poems from someone. This makes me wonder if i should make more poems. Here's a poem inspired from a girl lost:
Fate brought me to the edge of a cliff and I fumbled at its beauty
But it was up to me to take that leap of faith
I stumbled, i hit rocks
I fought, not hard enough
But im glad i took that flight
Because in so far as is overtly true
You are one hell of a dive
It would be an honor if you share me your thoughts on my piece.
Salamat! Hope you get more inspiration for your work
So we are on the same page :). I love the way how you use abstract words and uncommon concrete words for your piece and yet you still succeeded in pointing out your thoughts. I still struggle to broaden the use of unused words in poetry and especially in avoiding idiomatic expressions.
Thank you for your appreciation @josejirafa. I will be looking forward for your poems. 😎