Very well written story.
I got a little lost in the beginning, I wasn't sure if they were in a police station or the main character's house.
I enjoyed the detail used to describe the attack from the vine monster.
I checked my back in the broken mirror. The vines had eviscerated my clothing. Leaving it shredded and blood stained.
The ripped remains of my t-shirt fell to the ground as I stretched. Black wings began to stretch behind me into the shower.
Her jaw dropped.
“You haven't even seen crazy yet.”
Really great ending, will definitely be reading the next chapter. Great way to leave readers on edge with that last line.
Overall, very good chapter.
Maybe try to make the setting more obvious, I'm not the best reader so it might just be that I'm stupid and missed it :D
muy caliente!
Thanks 🙈
Very well written story.
I got a little lost in the beginning, I wasn't sure if they were in a police station or the main character's house.
I enjoyed the detail used to describe the attack from the vine monster.
Really great ending, will definitely be reading the next chapter. Great way to leave readers on edge with that last line.
Overall, very good chapter.
Maybe try to make the setting more obvious, I'm not the best reader so it might just be that I'm stupid and missed it :D
I had a transition like this between the police station and the apartment.
But the format made it all screwy so I deleted it.
Let me see if it'll let me add it.