What Is Filtering?  

  Filtering is when you filter the novel through the characters senses, creating an extra layer of distance between the reader and the story.    

List of Filter Words to Avoid

· saw 

· see 

· seen  

· hear 

· heard 

· think 

· thought  

· knew  

· touch 

· felt 

· feel 

· wonder 

· seem 

· decide 

· know 

· notice 

· realize 

· realized 

· watch 

· sound 

· taste 

· tasted    

Summary  

  Filter words are unnecessary words that prevent the reader from watching the action as the story unfolds. If a lot of filter words are used a reader will realize that something is lacking and get bored with the story. It is an indicator for an amateur writer. Go through the written work and eliminate all filtering words, this method is an easy way to improve writing. It adds value back into the story, allowing the reader back into the action. There are exceptions to this rule; sometimes it is necessary to filter the senses. You may want the reader to know the character heard a noise or saw a shadow on the wall. Be careful, if filtering is used to much the writer will tell his story instead of showing. Once the concept of Filtering is grasped the writer will experience a more vivid level of writing. The writer will move away from an amateur mode and on the path to a pro.   

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