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Hey Again, Steemitizens!

Carry On?

It's hard to admit things to yourself sometimes.
But it's easy to get lost in yourself.
It's easy to get lost in someone else.
It's easy to get lost.

Amazing grace.
How sweet the sound.
I once was lost.

But am I found?

I thought I was...
I'd like to think...
But I'm not so sure,
And in this I sink.

Carry on, my wayward son,
There'll be peace,
When you are done.
Lay your weary head to rest.
And don't you cry no more.

The lyrics of life,
With their catchy hooks.
Contain all the wisdom,
Of all of the books.

The lessons we learn,
have been learned before.
It's the lessons we need,
that we tend to ignore.

You better lose yourself in the music,
the moment, You own it,
You better never let it go.

To survive and carry on,
Is to surrender to the rhythm
And not let it beat you down.
Just keep your heart beating.
Don't let yourself drown.

Never say never.
You can't count that high.
There is only this moment.
Just don't question why.

If you try to understand it,
Your frustrations will flare.
It's better to stand still.
And just pray to the air.

The word is about, there's something evolving,
whatever may come, the world keeps revolving
They say the next big thing is here,
that the revolution's near,
but to me it seems quite clear
that it's all just a little bit of history repeating.

It's all the same stories,
They are nothing new.
It's happened to others.
It's happened to you.

It's all just a little bit of history repeating.

It's all just a little bit of history, defeating.


This piece is a combination of my own words, mixed with lyrics from popular songs. Sources for the lyrics indicated above in plain italics between my own words, demarcated with bold text to become the parts that made the whole are from the following sources.

Alan Jackson: Amazing Grace (Traditional Christian Hymn)

Kansas: Carry On My Wayward Son

Eminem: Lose Yourself

The Propellerheads, Featuring Miss Shirley Bassey: History Repeating


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Your writing always impresses me! Had I not known the lyrics, I would've believed they were your own. My favorite part:
"To survive and carry on,
Is to surrender to the rhythm
And not let it beat you down.
Just keep your heart beating.
Don't let yourself drown"

Your words...the mic drops! Much love ❤️️

Awww, thank you for reading my work.
And thanks for the awesome lyrics compliment!

Much love right back at ya peachy nurse! 🍑 ❤️️

My favorites:
The lessons we learn,
have been learned before.
It's the lessons we need,
that we tend to ignore.

And of course,

Never say never.
You can't count that high.

Best part of these verses is the writer that wrote them. Inspired by others, but no body drops a line of poetry like you. 😁❤️

Aw thank you so much. Inspired by more than were mentioned here....
looks towards the sky

<3

... I almost didn't catch that, but then I read your comment again and I just knew. 💕

I knew you would. <3

LOL, you make me smile when I need it, bonus daughter. :-)

My favorite : You better lose yourself in the music,
the moment, You own it,
You better never let it go.
You have only one shot, this opportunity come once in a lifetime!
Have a great day ahead sir!

Well, you know that is the famous Eminem rap star's words, not mine, but I do love what he has to say there too! :)

Have a fantastic weekend!

It is actually one of my favorite song! Everyday when I was driving for work, Eminem was always giving me company!
Cheers
@progressivechef

Thanks for accompanying me :D

Suffice to credit your novelty with the creation of a genre of creative writing called "annotationisque poetry", sire. That was a lovely read to compensate my present insomnia.

"It's all just a little bit of history, defeating." LIT!

I struggle with one language and you probably speak a minimum of three. Yet still you make up new words for my first language! lit indeed!

Misterakpan! My man, my friend, my distant brother. Thank you for reading. Off to see if it's been your turn again yet now!

😊 I will put out something in a few hours. Remember I'm learning to walk again in my writing prostheses. It's a lot of effort for the eggs of words to fertilize 😂😂

No pressure ;)

hurry up!

If you try to understand it,
Your frustrations will flare.
It's better to stand still.
And just pray to the air.
Sircock you are the man. Wait up is this the poem you were talking in the PAL general channel.

No that was yesterday's entry to Julia's contest, and I'm not sure if you are picking on me or not, but its CoRk ;) Though I do appreciate the confidence you have in my equipment :D

Hi my friend good post i am @dj noel ;)

Thank you.

Ohhhhh! Instalove! Read me another bedtime story!

I really need to come over here more often

Taking it home

Home is where the heart is.

Can I help you carry that?

:) My house is very heavy. How strong are you feeling?

I have a strong heart...

Good you tube ,hello

The youtube is just provided as a source. Did you even read what the post was about?

Don't your feet get cold in the winter time?
The sky won't snow and the sun won't shine
It's hard to tell the night time from the day
You're losin' all your highs and lows
Ain't it funny how the feeling goes away?

Desperado, why don't you come to your senses?
Come down from your fences, open the gate
It may be rainin', but there's a rainbow above you
You better let somebody love you
(let somebody love you)
You better let somebody love you before it's too late.

Time is something we can never have back. Never is it wasted when love is in balance. <3

logyx

Message received. LOUD AND CLEAR, sir. Thank you! <3

cork

Don't think I was sending a message you haven't already received.

It does sometimes settle in through repetition. ✌️

The loving will continue until morale improves. :-)

Well that just sounds like a love'm 'n leave'm situation. ;)

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