My poem for... Mizu no Oto [English Edition #31 - also in Spanish]

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Hoy traigo un nuevo haiku con motivo de la convocatoria de @bananafish. Al ser esta edición en inglés, por mi parte y como siempre, lo escribo originalmente en mi idioma, en castellano, para luego acompañar con una posible traducción al idioma solicitado. ¡Vamos allá pues!

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Today I bring a new haiku for the @bananafish call. As this edition is in English, on my part and as always, I write it originally in my own language, in Spanish, and then accompany it with a possible translation into the requested language. Let's go then!


[photo by @marcoriccardi]


La gris espera
ha llegado a tu orilla.
Amores mustios.

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The gray waits
has come to your shore.
Mouse loves.

La imagen de esta semana me ha transportado casi instantáneamente al mundo sensorial. Sensaciones grises, apagadas... como una vida sin amor. Como la chica que espera para siempre, solitaria, a que su mundo sea más reluciente.

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This week's image has transported me almost instantly to the sensory world. Gray, dull sensations... like a life without love. Like the girl who waits forever, lonely, for her world to become more shiny.



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Nice one, I wonder about the mouse.

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Thank you! Mouse loves, like sewer loves, dirty, sick...

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Pocas palabras, gran mensaje y más relacionado con la fotografía

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It is an almost raw expression ... "mouse loves", there is bitterness and sadness, but it is a vivid image

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