An Original Haiku: Kaleidoscope

in #haiku8 years ago (edited)

My entry into the Hello Hello Group Activity

KALEIDOSCOPE

Feast my eyes! Colour
bursts, reflected. Infinite
patterns in patterns.

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What is a Haiku?
Haikus are a Japanese traditional poetry form which uses 17 morae to tell a story. In English the accepted format is 17 syllables in a 5-7-5 line structure.

Why are Haikus an art form ?
The challenge is to express your thoughts with with a minimum of words, similarly to Earnest Hemingway's famous six word sentence.

Learn more about Haikus - here!

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Also in this Colour Challenge Series:
A SHORT STORY: The Gift of Colour
Fun Facts About Colour
My Top 5 - Colourful Candies during Childhood

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Hi @rlt47, Greetings from #HHG8! I tried to follow the link from #HHG8 but it showed error, so I find your Kaleidoscope in your page, please repost the correct link there.

I love this Haiku, especially on the part 'Patterns in Patterns'. Here's my version of Haiku for Kaleidoscope

KALEIDOSCOPE

Look at those patterns
High level creativities
Colors in colors

And here's an upvote for a colorful Haiku!

It is a surprise how you are choosing a word for making haiku which exactly fitting to the few words, precisely 7 + 5 +7...

Great going buddy...Keep it up

Lol @angelro, it's not 7-5-7, it's 5-7-5 okay.

Oh... My mistake... Sorry

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