EDEN......the place of love.
Hi Guys, this is you friend @optimistdehinde. This poem is talking about the life in Eden. My way of describing Eden. I hope you will like it.
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What about a life time in Eden?
life is full of ups and down.
Filled with laughter and trying times
Though man is meant to live and die one day.
But can there ever be a place like Eden?
Perhaps.....................................
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Can we go back to Eden?
The healthiest of trees that ever lived are found there.
Oh!That peaceful flowing stream
Abundance like the windows of Heaven.
Oh God, can there ever be a place like Eden?
Maybe...................................
Nothing on this earth can do anything about Eden.
Not even money, power or anything whatsoever.
None can replace of Eden.
That peaceful and solemn atmosphere of Eden
Oh! So fresh, cool and charming to behold.
Sincerely, can there ever be a place like Eden?
Sure and Yes......................................
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Let love take us back to Eden.
Why not allow true love to scatter our plan.
Cos'it has a better plan for us in the future.
Make love your Eden..............there flow the spring of living water.
You are my EDEN and I am unconditionally loved by you.
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Wish everyone can get what Eden means. Eden is a not a place. It is the presence of God. And that was where God created man to be. That is why Adam didn't need to pray.......... Owww! I feel like preaching. Nice post bro. U have my upvote.
This is so true and it all makes sense now. If Eden is the presence of God and God is love. Well then LOVE is the key. Thanks for this insightful comment @eloquentsam
thank you too for finding it to be good.
You got my upvote though its kinda worth nothing since I'm a newbie but at least you know this lil guy loves your work. Being poet myself, I'm kind of disappointed in myself because I've never thought of Eden in this way.This is great really. It's a good muse for me too though. Nice work bro
Really happy you like it. Don't despise the time of small and little beginnings. Also just coming up.
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STOPthe serenity and tranquility that dogs the place
we should pant and crave to be there
illusory it seems but very practicable
a wonderful piece from you blooda
You are very right. It is well
Nice poem Optimist. I like your description of Eden
thank you for the compliment and upvote.
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Nice one....keep it up !!! I like every expression... upvoted!
Am happy you love it. Thanks for the encouragement.
If perhaps there could be a place like , i think the will be an invitation....
hmmmmm.
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