simplicity

in #poetry • 9 years ago

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I want to love you simply
With words that could not be pronounced
Wood to the fire that makes it ashes

I want to love you simply
With a gesture that could not be delivered
Clouds to the rain that made it gone

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     9 years ago 

    I love this. Someone (maybe Pablo Neruda) once said that a poet doesn't say anything new, they just say it in ways that they have never been said before. I think this piece does that. Thank you for sharing in it. Upvoting and resteeming.

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     9 years ago 

    Thank u so much for ur appreciate..

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       9 years ago 

      You're welcome. If you'd like, check out some of my stuff. I'd like to hear what you think.

      One - a poem about math and love
      Something to Say - spoken word about why I write
      The Web - spoken word about love
      Progress - 3 word haiku about mankind
      Hogna Carolinensis - haiku about a species of spider

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