Steemit OpenMic week 44 - Original song "Tonight"

in #openmic7 years ago (edited)

Hey openmic friends! Last week was my first time submitting and I jumped in very last minute. This week, I'm trying to get in a bit earlier... even though I'm pretty sick right now, I still wanted to throw this in today. 💪🏽

Good luck to everyone who's participating, great work providing the sound waves ✌🏼🎶

Here's an original song of mine, called "Tonight". If you're interested to hear how it's actually supposed to sound when I am functioning at 100%, feel free to visit me on iTunes, Spotify, Apple Music, etc.. or my webpage.

Cheers xo

To have it all
Sometimes you've gotta risk it all
Sometimes you've gotta hit a wall
Will you catch me if I fall?
I want it all

If we end up with it all
Will you be there when I call?
Make my troubles feel so small
Say you'll catch me if I fall
I want it all

Tonight, I'm dancing in the moonlight
Tonight, I'm standing in the flames
Tonight, I'm laying all my cards out on the line
Tonight
Tonight

I'll give my all
I'll be the one to break your fall
When the stars are all aligned
I am yours and you are mine
Yeah we've got it all

Tonight, we're dancing in the moonlight
Tonight, we're standing in the flames
Tonight, I'm laying all my cards out on the line
Tonight
Tonight

Tonight I'm gonna risk it all
Take my chances, big or small
Tonight I'm gonna give my all
I've got you there to break my fall
I know we're gonna make it thru
You've got me and I've got you
I promise not to let you down
Can't hold me down
I'd risk it all
Tonight
Tonight

"Tonight" - Kate Jablonski
copyright 2016

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Beautiful :) upvoted and resteemed. You can sing girl!

😊🙏🏻🎶

This is incredible! You have such an amazing gift, vocally and lyrically! I can't wait to hear more from you! Also if you are interested in natural remedies to help relieve the cold symptoms and speed recovery then Let me know! I love sharing all of the info I've learned in the past year on my weightloss journey of 145 pounds 😲

I liked and resteemed as well, it was actually the first post I resteemed when I created my acount, taking the time to do that is a waste imo when every commenter before and after you is recognized with a thanks at least... 🙄

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Great singing and playing! :)

Thanks Nick - I'm not very confident with my guitar playing, but I do it anyways to support my vocals.. I can't always have my band behind me ;)

No problem! Nothing really wrong with your guitar playing. Keep on playing and you will be surprised how fast can skills be improved! :)

Great open mic entry!!!!! Love your playing. I also have an entry, can you please check it out? :)

Thank u, and yes I will :)

Good post my friend i am @djnoel :)

Thanks for playing Steemit Open Mic. Hope you feel better soon.

Hey! And thanks... open mic has been a good thing to join

Beautiful song!
Upvoted and I follow you now.
Listen to my composition for this week's open week if you can.

Hey Donatello, thank you for listening :) I will go check out your composition

Stumbled across your video on YouTube. Glad I found you on here and was able to give you an upvote! Great song.

;) appreciate it, glad you found my post here!

Like your post and I appreciate your not being at your best although I would not really have noticed had you not said. Some forceful vocals there! Any chance you might edit the post and add the lyrics?

Geoff

Hello again, and thank you. I don't mind posting lyrics - since Im still a newbie, wondering if that's what people like to see/look for in original song music posts?

Hi,
When I buy an album by whoever, I personally like to be able to follow the lyrics. Even singers with the best diction can be misheard in the mix from time to time and if people don't want to read them they won't I guess.😉

yes I agree. Updated my post to include lyrics.. it helps bring the songwriting to life.

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