Where I Reside

in #poetry6 years ago



Even between the closest human beings, infinite distances continue
—Rainer Maria Rilke



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In our closeness
There are infinities;


Gaps
In our togetherness,

Starry spaces
And desert skies—

And then
A great chasm

Greater than
The Boötes void,

With so few stars
To break the darkness…

And that’s where
I reside.



© 2019, John J Geddes. All rights reserved



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I am really loving this poem John. I read it about 10 times and found myself in a different place each time. So cool!! :-D

You are very intuitive! I taught poetry for years and found different levels of comprehension and enjoyment on various readers' parts - it's a different way of knowing and your instincts are good. Thank you.


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