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RE: He who walks these streets (Short Story)
Well written! :) I like your choice of words and phrases. To answer your question, I personally think that this could be going on in the killer's mindset accepting his defeat / fate. However I liked this short story and as well your 50W-only Challenge. :)
Thank you :) !! Gotta admit, i was definitely thinking more of the killer, or possibly someone who knows the killer personally, I feel like the 50w version was more open, and the more it grew, the more it tipped one way over the other. I wasn't actually thinking defeat, but reading it back, that it what I see, when I was writing that bit, I was more thinking about how a killer on the street would inconvenience other people up to no good, but in the story that came out, I think you are actually right, and it is more him accepting defeat, or even hoping for defeat. Awww i love it when other people understand my stories better than I did lol!